Category Archives: Year 1

Well done Maia for some excellent Literacy work. Interesting sentences, neat writing and lovely art work.

Congratulations on being the first on the ‘Well Done Blog’ this term.

I am so proud of these new young writers. They have been practicing and its quite a skill you know! So much to remember… neat writing, finger spaces, capital letters, full stops, question marks…..These recent stories are inspired by a picture and title, ‘Creatures of the Night’. Well done to Ria Shetty for an excellent story! See some other great stories below:

One dark scary night two owls were sitting on a tree. A fox came and he wanted to eat the owls. The owls flew away.

Muhammed

One night there were two owls. They lived in a magic tree. One night a fox crept up on the owls. It wanted to eat them but the magic tree saw the fox. So the magic tree flew away and they lived happily ever after.

Bethany

One dark night there were two owls. They lived in a magic tree. One night a fox said mmmmm! He wanted to eat the owls. He climbed the tree but he fell down because it was a magic tree. The owls laughed. The fox said ‘what is so funny?’ he said ‘I will catch you’, but he fell.

Jaap

One dark scary night there were two owls in the tree. The fox ate the owls and then there were no more owls.

Mikaeel

One dark scary night two owls sat in a baobab tree. They were so happy. But one night foxes were pushing the tree that had magic powers, but the tree got very angry. The owls were saying watch out, watch out. The tree did some powers on the fox.

Aisha